latest summary of pitch

To summaries the latest pitch:

We start off in a car, our main male character is at the wheel with three female passengers in the car, there expressions are blank although they are bruised and bleeding due to a car accident they have just had. we have a montage of the boyfriend girlfriend relationship. ie, picnic at the park etc. the male is singing the words in the background of these scenes watching himself and his girlfriend. towards the end of the video, the bf gf are having an argument inside their house, the gf gets her coat and bag and storms out the house. The bf leaves and goes to the pub, he has a few drinks their and meets these three girls. He has a bit more to drink than he should of concidering he is driving, we then cut to the scene of the collision in the car, the same as the first shot, we then move out of the car, down the road to see his gf lying on the floor dead due to the car accident.