pitch response

Our pitch was not as successful as we had hoped. However, the class contributed valuable comments which we will use as constructive criticism to alter some of our earlier proposed ideas. We feel that the narrative of our video still resembles the genre of the song. Some of the chnages we may make as a response to our pitch, would be to avoid the use of blood and injuries and change the "car crash" into a less dramatic effect, as we were being over hopeful as to how it would turn out.

Feedback we received:
- plan the exact locations
- check out the past student videos, one particular has used a car
- re-think how we will perform the car accident
- to get permission to film in any locations we may choose
- get appropriate actors

the research will still need to do is to plan the exact locations, find a male actor who is willing to take on the role of the boyfriend and get a definite shot list.

Overall we feel that presenting the pitch has benefited our group and the feedback has been very useful to our group and has helped us to overcome some disagreements.