Camerawork:
- zooming out at the end works really well
- spinning round shot at beginning is good
- few fuzzy shots (playground-swing)
- need more angles
- a couple of shots out of focus
- variety of shots
Editing:
- at the beginning when you hve the pan of the man and girl sitting down and then onto man - very good
- shots too long at times
- need more cuts and shots
- too much swinging!
- good
Effects:
- camera cutting well good
- really good effects- don't over use the cloudy effect
Mise en Scene:
- looks normal with the park location and happy
Performance/genre:
- good - well performed
Continuity:
- well good story!
- shock at the end
- strong story
Overall comments:
- very good
- Christina well done at the whole Frisbee throwing
- she got owned
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